literature

a ghost.

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gossamer and gleaming
i whisper through walls
and scream without a breath
i dance without feet as i drink moon light
or better yet…

i see what you cannot
without even opening my eyes
in your dreams, i hear your wishes
and feel the lies
"i'm innocent, i swear!"

i laugh at these dreams.
i laugh at death,
i laugh at pain, and
how so soon you will join me.

…after all, I am a ghost of my former self.
even i have my lowercase impulses.

p.s. critique is greatly appreciated. because i feel like this kind of sucks.
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Zephelia-Rising's avatar
If you are going to do your i's lowercase, can you at least have all of them lowercase??

Anyways, I love this one bunches.